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Wulmatiki
post Oct 29 2007, 09:18 AM
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I would like some constructive crticism for this site.
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Now as a disclaimer, the actual content in the site is satire/parody and the actual company doesn't exist, it's an assignment.

If you read it, (not the news page, it's boring) I hope you have a sense of humour. tongue.gif


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post Oct 29 2007, 01:06 PM
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its perfect, ish i could make it like that. very smooth particulary like the cockpit.
Also site map very handy

i only think you could have done the menu better, maybe the same lightblue color as the background of the Main, u feelin me?
and maybe the width of the site higher, more screen filling???

i dunno what u think but its just my opinion, nice site! keep it up
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post Oct 29 2007, 01:13 PM
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i cant really answear that if im rateing overall site since you didnt build it every one knows you only use freewebs for the site building tools so i have no answear,or if you use freewebs for your on site your a idiot cause their nomeral hosting sucks.and they make you put ads

and i dont really like how some of the menus go out and some don't


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post Oct 29 2007, 02:03 PM
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hammmmm...... Nice try keep it up
i like the site map but color scheming is not good


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post Oct 29 2007, 07:18 PM
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i cant really answear that if im rateing overall site since you didnt build it every one knows you only use freewebs for the site building tools so i have no answear,or if you use freewebs for your on site your a idiot cause their nomeral hosting sucks.and they make you put ads

and i dont really like how some of the menus go out and some don't


The whole thing has been coded by me in DW, using CSS, Div's and etc. etc. You don't have to use Freeweb's site making tools, however uploading the site is very very crap. One file at a time. wink.gif
Freewebs suck, but they are better than 740.com which I was testing on at one point, which had pop-up's appearing everywhere. Freewebs on the other hand just needs a banner.

Also I'm a student and therefore poor.

The main reason why those drop down menu's look kinda dodgy is because they were a requirement I had missed so it was kinda last minute.
Alright I'll change the drop down items to more suit the main menu structure, the reason why some don't have sub pages is because of time. I don't have too much time and I have an 6 assignments to complete

But thanks anyway and I'll change the look of the pop-up menus.

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i only think you could have done the menu better, maybe the same lightblue color as the background of the Main, u feelin me?
and maybe the width of the site higher, more screen filling???


If you have a close look, the menu and the logo are actually transparent and the clouds will go behind them to kinda improve on some of the visuals. The design is one I rehashed from another assignment, thanks to my instructors dumping another 6 on top of me as soon as we got back from Hols.
I would probably argue against making the site any wider, because I don't have enough time to make more content to make the site feel more full and because it was hard enough already to making it up for the side panel >.>
Thanks anyway though

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hammmmm...... Nice try keep it up
i like the site map but color scheming is not good


How so? Can you elaborate a bit?


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post Oct 29 2007, 07:31 PM
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hey, if you need multiple uploading check out www.110mb.com good hosting no down time 15 gb monthly bandwith
1gb room for your site.its free too

im not talking about the colors of the drop down menus, im talking about some of them don't drop down, its kinda weird ?

shahzad not to be mean but most of your replys are cunfuseing and you cant really speak much engilsh ? i don't think you should be here not speaking full engilsh ?, or try and make your posts more understandable


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post Oct 29 2007, 07:43 PM
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hey, if you need multiple uploading check out www.110mb.com good hosting no down time 15 gb monthly bandwith
1gb room for your site.its free too

im not talking about the colors of the drop down menus, im talking about some of them don't drop down, its kinda weird ?

shahzad not to be mean but most of your replys are cunfuseing and you cant really speak much engilsh ? i don't think you should be here not speaking full engilsh ?, or try and make your posts more understandable


lmao that hosting would've been nice before I uploaded the 100 or so files >.> Yeah sucks to be me right now.
The reason why some of them don't drop down is because I didn't make sub pages for that category, I've only got so much time now thanks to it being crunch time @ Tafe.
Also the pop-up menus were kinda tacked on at the last minute XD


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post Oct 31 2007, 07:48 PM
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and 110mb.com has where you can just put every thing in a zip file and upload it then unload every thing out tongue.gif

i use it for my test pages to show my friends family what i'm working on


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post Nov 18 2007, 12:09 AM
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I did not know you could do so much with freewebs. Cool site!
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post Nov 19 2007, 09:11 AM
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looking good! little work on the colour scheme maybe, as mentioned above.

Also, what's the logo about?


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